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Undead Legionary by CarloValente Undead Legionary by CarloValente
Undead Legionary
Digital painting

WIPs: [link]

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Copyright "Mutant Chronicles" card game
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Critique by sabillano May 31, 2012, 12:03:47 PM
In overall is quite good, I like the idea. The helmet, glasses and back part are really well done.
The weakest part maybe is the mouth, I don't have any issues with the eye and nose, but the mouth is flat.
It is pretty easy to solve the problem, you just have to add the back part of it, the teeth that are behind, and they don't have to be as well done as the front ones, just showing a silloutte would be enough to solve the problem. I know that you could think that as it is on a profile view they are not supposed to be there, but they should, or at least a dark silloutte .
In my opinion if you solve that problem you are done.

I am sorry for my English but I am not a native speaker.
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KnightofSpades Featured By Owner Feb 11, 2013
Wow a classic looking Undead legionare. Great work
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Paizo Featured By Owner Jun 21, 2012
blasting amazing!
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Paizo Featured By Owner Jun 21, 2012
blasting amazing!
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Jingiss Featured By Owner May 28, 2012  Student General Artist
Here to show you what i mean --> [link]
Just sharpened and few more highlights. Just a suggestion
Jingiss
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CarloValente Featured By Owner May 30, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
super thanks my friend.
I am just starting another work for studyng values. I will show you my WiPs soon!
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Jingiss Featured By Owner May 28, 2012  Student General Artist
Rly Idea and pic, but i think you could add more contrast to get more epicness. Some lighter highlights
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Jingiss Featured By Owner May 28, 2012  Student General Artist
Rly cool*
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